Gene/Jeanie doesn’t seem to be totally OK with his transformation, and would change himself back if he could, but he’s also an opportunist who was getting off on the power of magic she has.

Melvin’s friend certainly seems to want to be changed back, and is hiding the fact she’s changed by wearing baggy clothes, etc. It’s just going to take a while since Jeanie is currently magic impaired.

Of course, I like the long game . . .

I would like to see plots. You know, story ideas that are introduced, developed and then resolved. It doesn’t have to be sitcom style, where the plot begins and ends in a week, but resolutions would be nice to see instead of plots that are introduced and then just taper off and are lost as another one starts in its place.

Character development could be introduced. Gene apparently completely wanted this transformation, as does just about any other character that has something odd happen to them. no one freaks out, no one laments what has happened to them- hell, they never even seem to try to change their fate, save for Neil making his way home from the strip clubs. Perhaps some characters could actually react to changed that occur, maybe even seek solutions?

Were Neil and Gene friends? Yes, Gene was a misogynistic knucklehead and it is darn good for Neil he didn’t get transformed, but Neil doesn’t seem that concerned that Gene’s gone.

When you started out it looked like you were setting things up as a sort of warped mirror to the old sitcom crossed with maybe some Office Space. Now we’ve got two concurrent plots going nowhere and the flavor of hearkening back to the old sitcom is really pretty much gone at this point, save for the title. Perhaps bringing the strip back to its roots could make it easier to keep on the rails.

I know, I know… I’m a mouthy and critical broad and if I have so many issues with the strip why do i keep reading it? Because it is out there, it is free to read and it made me laugh a few times and I keep hoping that it might return to the formula that it started with and make more laughs. That’s why I have said all of this here today- because you asked for the input and I do have some points to offer.

I hope I’ve managed to inform and offer perspective without offending. Thanks for your time and your strip, and I’ll be watching to see what the future brings…

~Sabrina