The Melvin Chronicles
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OMG,this won’t be good….
Haven’t seen that comming. It seems that Lord Guano’s threat might become real in the end: Jeannie will be trapped in her bottle for a very long time.
And now some critique: I don’t like the colour switch from artistic point of view (I know it’s because of the genie law). Jeannie in blue might work, but the pink doesn’t reall fit Araceli. Just my opinion.
I think she looks lovely in pink!
I like Areceli in pink but i don’t like Jeannie in blue…
Seriously, you need to proofread.
…At this point, I’m not sure that English is his first language.
Of course, he could just be an engineer…
Also “You can’t be done WITH your training already…”
And yeah, he really needs a proofreader. I see more typos in this comic than any other webcomic I read, and I’ve got about 30 that I read daily. And I’d be glad to help out.
I wonder how red is doing.
Anybody gonna explain what “Koroido” means?
I’m guessing it DOESN’T mean “rocket scientist.”
Google translates it as “spoof” so I’m guess that in context it means something like “idiot” or “sucker.”
If you click on the word in Google Translate, it’ll give you ‘alternate translations’ (one of listed those actually is ‘sucker’).
It translates as “sucker”, or someone that is easy to fool. Talking from personal experience.
Jeanie looks awesome in blue. Maybe that’s just because I love blue, though.
Really should learn the rules…
What a pity, no genie war
But Jeanie should come back sooner or later, and thirsty of revenge!
Oooh, a twist!
I am wondering what Araceli meant about at least you have a nice bottle. Does this mean that Jean’s Bottle is like a nice home, and that Araceli’s Bottle is a run down, dump, or what.
I think she was just setting Jean up with that. And Jean walked right into it. Araceli was slick.
Someone should’ve read the instruction manual a little more when she had the chance.
I’m think eventually the truth will come out and jeans’ new bottle will be wish back
ROFL! Wow, who knew Araceli could do something so clever. XD
Not sure I like Aracelli in pink…hope she keeps the heels
Well…the comic sure keeps me guessing at least! Did NOT see THAT one coming!
Last panel — shouldn’t Araceli’s harem pants have a PINK waistband and RED pantlegs?
I agree with LexusAmaru — Araceli should keep the now-red high heels.
They both look particularly cute in each others’ colours. Though, it shouldn’t be /that/ hard for Neil to wish Jean’s bottle to be somewhere where it wouldn’t be stuck in the middle of the ocean, if not actually having it brought to him. Maybe Melvin or one of his friends could end up with it?
You really think they look good in each other’s outfits? I find the color schemes truly unflattering to both of them.
It is not each others outfits that got changed, it was only the colour scheme that was changed
I should of seen this coming xD
Guano wont be mad about this one for sure, although he might actually hate araceli more because she had to end up in the ocean somehow. So guano may bring Jeanie back.
Besides, Jean really isn’t finished with her training and Kazom sent her back only to annoy Guano, so, yeah, I think Guano brings her back! (If only to get even with Kazom!)
I think there is only one person that will want her back and that is neal.
And he will make a wish for araceli to bring jean’s bottle to him.
Provided that Neal knows Jean came back and then was sent to the ocean. And the only one who knows it is Araceli, who isn’t very interested in bringing her back.
However, I believe that when Jean switched bottles with Araceli, she should have also switched master genies, so now Guano is Araceli’s trainer and Jean will have to deal with the one that had sent Araceli to the ocean. I wonder if she won’t miss Guano when she meets him (or her) for the first time.
Still some higher genie will intervene due to jean not knowing as much as some other genie’s. Although I do wonder what araceli did to end up in the ocean though…
Out of the frying pan, into the fire.
me’thinks she was in the ocean for a reason.
She said she wanted to be rid of the bottle, not trade bottles. I see a loop hole.
I’m hoping that Aracelli’s master orders her to bring Jeanie back.
Jean’s smart she’ll figure out a way out of this.
Somebody gonna have some ‘splainin’ to do.
This is an amazing comic. It’s the first web-comic I’ve ever read, and probably the only one. But there are lots of grammar mistakes. We’d love it if you assigned a group of proofreaders to read your comics for feedback and grammar/typo mistakes.
That is what all of us readers are for!
Aracelli looks much better in the blue.
…wouldn’t it be easy for Neil to retrieve her, though?
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